Saturday, January 4, 2014

Midreview Feedback

NAME
GRADE
PROJECT
COMMENTS
GRAPHICS
PRESENTATION
CONCEPT
Al Fadhel, Mujahed W.
C-
67
Reinterpreting the urban fabric
Use different types of courtyards and they articulate/organize functions around them
Study proportions
XX
X
X
Ballout, Ibrahim M.
C+
75
The loop
make loop evolve into a stronger concept that address more directly urban and programmatic considerations
XX
XX
XX
Boueiri, Samer G.
C-
69
Plug-in
Bipolarity
Get back to the skin as generator of form. skin ( not volume) should remain the most prominent element in building
Do not use geometry of cell division as direct inspiration
Do not seek pure geometrical compositions
xx
x
x
Chahoud, Alain A.
B
80

Study arrival and entering sequence and put the square as such
Open spaces connect city to project and should remain open outside working hours of project
Consider suspension of the fragmented building over the platform
Reference: oma cultural center in akka
xxx
xx
xx
Dagher, Nayla E.
C
72
stripes
Elaborate penetration towards waterfront and main street.
Voids between buildings should be compatible between model, plans and should be active
Plans without corridors.. use voids to cross
Reference: sanaa architects
Structure should play a more important role, ex:Use structure to have removable roof.

xx
x
xx
Haddad, Lea E.
A-
87
Building as promenade
Linearity is redundant
Study balance between fat bldg. on triangular lot versus long on rectangular lot
Serpentine form should create more studied outdoor spaces.
Lifting building up should be more studied as it offers strategic viewpoint of project and to views
Path as garden
Provide more Accessibility from roof ( reference: Foreign office architects)
xxx
xxx
xxx
Hamzeh, Shadi A.
C
72
rotule
-Rethink ground floor and shifting
-Reference project: casa de la musica by oma
-Structural system of circulation to reach -different points.
xx
x
xx
Marouf, Rawaz O.
C-
69
connection
Reinterpret programmatic diagram as potential form.
Missing requirements
xxx
x
xx
Mezher, Mohamad T.
C+
76

Reference: Barcello market
Roof scape
Grand finale : replace volume with square
xx
xx
xx
Oueidat, Sam S.
C
72
Vertical voids
Rules should be more simple
Voids should be sculpted
Refined form instead of random aggregation
xx
xx
x
Sulaiman, Hasan A.
C+
73

Inner street
Access
Program day/night
Refine language
xx
xx
x
Taouk, Amanda
B-
77

Activate ground floor
Natural system/porous/ecological
xx
xx
x
Tabet, Joseph W.
A-
87

Direct relationship on ground floor
Simplify roof and improve connection
More entrances from courtyard
xxx
xxx
xxx

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